Sunday, May 19, 2024

The Last Unicorn a Review

 

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Today I'm excited to share my thoughts in review of a fantasy classic, The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle. It is the story of a unicorn who realizes, after overhearing a conversation between two hunters in her enchanted wood, that she may be the last existing unicorn in the world. To confirm this, she leaves her forest home and embarks on a journey to find out what happened to her fellow unicorns. Along the way, she encounters an inept wizard named Schmendrick and Molly Grue, a woman who has long given up on finding unicorns or on magic existing in the world.

 This novel is one that I've been meaning to read for a long time. As someone who loves writing fantasy myself, especially fantasies that involve fairy tale and folklore elements, I feel like this is one book I couldn't overlook as a possible mentor text. For those not familiar with what a mentor text is, it is a published work that writers read to gain insight into how to effectively employ crucial techniques in their own writing. These can range from things like characterization, to world building, to developing settings, or themes, employing figurative language, developing dialogue, and myriad other aspects of story creation. I can confidently say that I was not disappointed by this book even if it was originally published in 1968. However, there were some aspects of it that I felt could have been improved. As with even the most well-written books, no work is ever perfect. This one is beautiful enough though for the weaker aspects to be overlooked and those did not prevent me from fully enjoying the story. 

Let's get into it. First, let's talk about the numerous positives. First, the premise of this story is so unique and original. I do not recall ever reading a novel quite like this one before. The tone of the writing and the fairy tale aspects of it come closest to The Princess Bride in quality. However, The Last Unicorn is much more serious in tone and much less tongue in cheek in nature than William Goldman's work. The other thing I immediately noticed was the prose writing in this novel. Beagle is such a master of figurative language, description and weaving together beautiful prose to incorporate a deeper meaning into his writing. Take this description of Molly Grue for instance when she first sees the unicorn:

"Molly Grue laughed with her lips flat. 'And what good is it to me that you're here now? Where were you twenty years ago, ten years ago? How dare you, how dare you come to me now, when I am this?' With a flap of her hand she summed herself up: barren face, desert eyes, yellowing heart" (Beagle 97).

How beautiful and yet spare is that description of Molly in that moment, "barren face, desert eyes, yellowing heart." An earlier quote from Schmendrick sums up his condition as a wizard who cannot summon or control his power at will. It also is a beautiful commentary on the human condition as well where he says:

"'There is much misjudgment in the world. Now, I knew you were a unicorn when I first saw you... Yet you take me for a clown, or a clod or a betrayer, and so I must be if you see me so... We are not always what we seem, and hardly ever what we dream'" (Beagle 40). 

Again, so spare and yet so touching and heartbreaking as Schmendrick explains what being human often means to the immortal unicorn who wants for nothing and cannot feel regret. His explanation is so spot on when he tells her, "We are not always what we seem, and hardly ever what we dream." It's just gorgeous writing! Other aspects of the story that are lovely in their inception are the main characters in the novel, the unicorn, Schmendrick and Molly and how each changes during their quest. Schmendrick saves the unicorn but also changes her very nature at one point in the story by making her mortal. Molly softens and finds joy and purpose in her life again as she accompanies the wizard and the mystical beast in their journey. The unicorn herself changes, as in experiencing what it is to be mortal, she learns the immediacy of life by inhabiting a body that is dying as all mortal bodies begin to do from birth. She experiences regret as well, something no other unicorn can understand, and which continues to set her apart even when she saves her own kind, finding and setting the other unicorns free.

With all of those positives, you may wonder what could possibly be a weakness of this work? Well, I felt while the storytelling was wonderful overall, there were places where the plot lacked some development for some of its threads. The hero the main characters encounter is a little two dimensional for me. He does grow and change as a secondary character. But we are told he does this more than we are shown it. Also, the main villains in the story, King Haggard and his Red Bull, are meant to be mysterious and to an extent they are, but they were too mysterious for me. Too many questions were left unanswered in the story about their connection, how they first came to be a pair, who King Haggard really was and where he came from, what sort of creature the Red Bull really was, even the story behind the building of Haggard's castle could have been developed more. Of course, doing so would have made the book longer and maybe some of Beagle's shorter works set in this realm go back and answer some of these questions. However, it would have been nice to have more character and story development for both of these antagonists in terms of the plot. 

That being said, this is a phenomenal story. I do think even though it is marketed as being for an upper middle grade or young adult audience, that it might be harder for a contemporary young reader to get into. But I really hope that it will continue to be in print for many years to come, even if its appeal remains more for an adult audience. It is a lovely work and deserves its place in the fantasy canon.  If you would like to find a copy of your own to read, click on the title in this post and you will be taken to Better World Books, a wonderful used online bookstore that helps support literacy around the world with each purchase on their website. Even if you don't want to buy a copy of this book, check them out. 

Next month, I have a special treat for all of you! I will be sharing a Q&A session with author Katelyn Doyle about her debut rom-com Just Some Stupid Love Story which comes out June 6, 2024. My post of her Q&A will go live that same day, June 6th. I will also post a brief book review of the novel the Sunday before the Q&A goes live. Also in June, I'll be posting a review of an advanced reader copy (ARC) of T. Kingfisher's latest novel, A Sorceress Comes to Call that is set to come out August 6, 2024 and is "a dark reimagining of the Brothers Grimm's fairy tale The Goose Girl..." I'm thrilled to have a chance to read an ARC of T. Kingfisher's book as she is one of my favorite fantasy novelists. Below are some short blurbs about both these books.

For fans of Emily Henry, a debut about a rom-com screenwriter who doesn't believe in love and a divorce attorney who does, forced together at their high school reunion fifteen years after their breakup

Molly Marks writes Hollywood rom-coms for a living—which is how she knows “romance” is a racket. The one and only time she was naive enough to fall in love was with her high school boyfriend, Seth—who she ghosted on the eve of graduation and hasn’t seen in fifteen years.

Seth Rubinstein believes in love, the grand, fated kind, despite his job as, well…one of Chicago’s most successful divorce attorneys. Over the last decade, he’s sought “the one” in countless bad dates and rushed relationships. He knows his soulmate is out there. But so far, no one can compare to Molly Marks, the first girl who broke his heart.

When Molly’s friends drag her to Florida for their fifteenth high school reunion, it is poetic justice that she’s forced to sit with Seth. Too many martinis and a drunken hookup later, they decide to make a bet: whoever can predict the fate of five couples before the next reunion must declare that the other is right about true love. The catch? The fifth couple is the two of them.

Molly assures Seth they are a tale of timeless heartbreak. Seth promises she’ll end up hopelessly in love with him. She thinks he’s delusional. He has five years to prove her wrong.

Wickedly funny, sexy, and brimming with laughs and heart like the best romantic comedies, Just Some Stupid Love Story is for everyone who believes in soulmates—even if they would never admit it.

 From New York Times bestselling and Hugo Award-winning author T. Kingfisher comes Sorceress Comes to Call—a dark reimagining of the Brothers Grimm's "The Goose Girl," rife with secrets, murder, and forbidden magic.

*The hardcover edition features a foil stamp on the casing and custom endpapers illustrated by the author.*

Cordelia knows her mother is . . . unusual. Their house doesn’t have any doors between rooms—there are no secrets in this house—and her mother doesn't allow Cordelia to have a single friend. Unless you count Falada, her mother's beautiful white horse. The only time Cordelia feels truly free is on her daily rides with him.

But more than simple eccentricity sets her mother apart. Other mothers don’t force their daughters to be silent and motionless for hours, sometimes days, on end. Other mothers aren’t evil sorcerers.

When her mother unexpectedly moves them into the manor home of a wealthy older Squire and his kind but keen-eyed sister, Hester, Cordelia knows this welcoming pair are to be her mother's next victims. But Cordelia feels at home for the very first time among these people, and as her mother's plans darken, she must decide how to face the woman who raised her to save the people who have become like family.

"Kingfisher never fails to dazzle."—Peter S. Beagle, Hugo-, Nebula-, and Locus-Award winning author of The Last Unicorn


Friday, May 10, 2024

Exciting News!!!

 I have exciting news to share! I have been invited to participate in a blog tour for the upcoming release of Katelyn Doyle's rom-com, Just Some Stupid Love Story. I cannot share all of the details about what that will fully entail yet, or when she will guest appear on my blog. But it means a bonus post for my readers and a possible Q&A with the author as well as a review of her latest book. I was honored to read an ARC of it on NetGalley earlier this year and it has been one of my favorite NetGalley reads to date. Below is the cover and a blurb about the book copied from NetGalley. Enjoy and I look forward to sharing more news about Katelyn's blog tour soon!

   

For fans of Emily Henry, a debut about a rom-com screenwriter who doesn't believe in love and a divorce attorney who does, forced together at their high school reunion fifteen years after their breakup

Molly Marks writes Hollywood rom-coms for a living—which is how she knows “romance” is a racket. The one and only time she was naive enough to fall in love was with her high school boyfriend, Seth—who she ghosted on the eve of graduation and hasn’t seen in fifteen years.

Seth Rubinstein believes in love, the grand, fated kind, despite his job as, well…one of Chicago’s most successful divorce attorneys. Over the last decade, he’s sought “the one” in countless bad dates and rushed relationships. He knows his soulmate is out there. But so far, no one can compare to Molly Marks, the first girl who broke his heart.

When Molly’s friends drag her to Florida for their fifteenth high school reunion, it is poetic justice that she’s forced to sit with Seth. Too many martinis and a drunken hookup later, they decide to make a bet: whoever can predict the fate of five couples before the next reunion must declare that the other is right about true love. The catch? The fifth couple is the two of them.

Molly assures Seth they are a tale of timeless heartbreak. Seth promises she’ll end up hopelessly in love with him. She thinks he’s delusional. He has five years to prove her wrong.

Wickedly funny, sexy, and brimming with laughs and heart like the best romantic comedies, Just Some Stupid Love Story is for everyone who believes in soulmates—even if they would never admit it.

Sunday, May 5, 2024

The Good, Bad and the Ugly of this Self-Published YA Fantasy

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I want to say right from the start here and now that I am not at all against anyone choosing to self-publish their novel. I have read some phenomenal young adult and adult novels that were self-published by their authors. Some of them have been even better and more polished than some traditionally published novels I've read. However, I really encourage anyone considering going that route to seek some professional editing before self-publishing. If you do not have beta readers or a critique group to workshop your work with, then seeking out both a developmental editor and a copyeditor is important. Though as writers we love our work and are capable of some revision on our own, an extra set of eyes can really take the level of development on a novel up to as good if not better than traditional publishing standards. So, that being said let's get into the good, the bad and the ugly for this novel.

I was very intrigued by the blurb for this book when I saw it listed on NetGalley and which I've copied here below from the site.

To be a Keeper was to dedicate one’s life – and heart – to protecting another.

Jasmine wasn’t ready for it. Less than a year into her training at Sanctuary, a college for Keepers and mages alike, and with a fresh start from a brutal life of thievery in the slums, all she wanted to do was continue mastering the sword arts and avoid her other responsibilities.

Those plans are ruined when she's assigned to be the protector of a young nobleman whose family was murdered. Her new charge is cocky, smug, and drives her up a wall at every opportunity.

Forced to protect a man she can’t stand with her life, Jasmine needs to find time that isn’t there to continue her training and keep assassins from killing both of them, all the while learning magic and discovering that there’s more to life than survival.

And yet, Jasmine starts to find herself inexplicably drawn to him. In the slums, Jasmine never had room to care about anything other than putting food on the table. But she’s not in the slums anymore, and she can’t keep her feelings tied down forever.

Unfortunately, burgeoning love is the least of Jasmine’s problems. As pieces of a malevolent plot start to unfold around them, she and her charge realize that there might be only one thing left that they can rely on.

Each other.


In terms of the plot, it is a decent story with lots of intrigue, some truly great training sequences for Jasmine, the female lead, as well as some really nice twists at the end. I really enjoyed the fact that the female lead in this novel, Jasmine, had to protect the male lead, Asher, from mysterious assassins. I also appreciated that while he was a decent fighter in the Keeper program, before his entire family is killed, Jasmine was the more proficient fighter and even becomes a better strategist. The fact that Asher sees her as more than an equal was also a good change from many previous traditional fantasy tropes. The magic system was interesting and unique as well. I don't remember ever reading about a magic system like it before. I also have to say that I really love the cover art for this book as well.

So, what were some of the negatives for this book you might be wondering? Well, for me at least, I felt there were so many missed opportunities with the worldbuilding for it. Most of these could have probably been avoided if there had been stronger developmental editing with it, which is such a shame, because it is a great premise and the key moments that could have been fleshed out more with it could have really set it apart as a stellar novel. However, in terms of the worldbuilding overall, I felt like I was thrust into the middle of things without much backstory to help me connect to the main characters. Normally, if the bits of backstory are woven into it as it unfolds a little later, I can go with it. But I didn't feel that this happened as much as it could have. We never fully understand the dynamics of this kingdom or why the king chose to promote Jasmine to Keeper training. All we hear about is that she drew his attention during a pickpocketing incident. But there is really no development about why or how she endeared herself to him enough in the moment to deserve saving from the gutters rather than being punished for what she did. A scene like this might have been a really good way to start the novel and then when we get to her training as a Keeper, we would be even more connected to her and what is happening. We could also get some similar backstory interwoven later in the book about Asher's feelings about his family and what happened to them. Instead, we only get his point of view about Jasmine and his feelings for her and while these are important, having your whole family annihilated unexpectedly like that would be devestating even if you didn't feel particularly close to them. We only get surface info about all of this and the school and the different divisions of people within it. The same is true about the mysterious organization we learn about that is after Asher. We learn they are bad and have toppled whole kingdoms, but not how or why they do this. Also, now that I think about it, I have no idea how the title even connects to the story for Keeper of the Scarlet Petals. More development for this world would have really taken this story up from 3 out of 5 stars for me to 5 out of 5.

As for the ugly, I will just say that there were plenty of places where grammar, punctuation and just overall copyediting for this book could have improved it as well. I can overlook small mistakes like this as I realize that no book is ever going to be perfect in this respect. But it did not seem that any copyedits were done on Keeper of the Scarlet Petals at all. 

That being said, the plot twists and the training sequences with Jasmine's Keeper mentor, Riker, and Jasmine and Asher as they try to figure out what is happening with him and his magic were really fun and compelling. I also enjoyed the slow burn romance between Jasmine and Asher. I do agree with other reviewers in that this may be marketed as a New Adult book, but it reads very much as a Young Adult novel. Overall, this was an entertaining fantasy read. I hope any sequels to this book give us even richer worldbuilding and backstory as the plot continues to unfold. I was given a free ARC for this novel to read in exchange for this honest review by NetGalley and Aethon Books.

In a couple of weeks, my next book review will be of Peter S. Beagle's The Last Unicorn. I've already begun reading it and while I found it a little slow in the first chapter, I am really loving it now! I can see why it is considered a gold standard for fantasy literature. Here is a blurb about the book, courtesy of Goodreads, for those of you unfamiliar with it:

The Last Unicorn is one of the true classics of fantasy, ranking with Tolkien's The Hobbit, Le Guin's Earthsea Trilogy, and Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland. Beagle writes a shimmering prose-poetry, the voice of fairy tales and childhood:

The unicorn lived in a lilac wood, and she lived all alone. She was very old, though she did not know it, and she was no longer the careless color of sea foam but rather the color of snow falling on a moonlit night. But her eyes were still clear and unwearied, and she still moved like a shadow on the sea.

 The unicorn discovers that she is the last unicorn in the world, and sets off to find the others. She meets Schmendrick the Magician—whose magic seldom works, and never as he intended—when he rescues her from Mommy Fortuna's Midnight Carnival, where only some of the mythical beasts displayed are illusions. They are joined by Molly Grue, who believes in legends despite her experiences with a Robin Hood wannabe and his unmerry men. Ahead wait King Haggard and his Red Bull, who banished unicorns from the land.

This is a book no fantasy reader should miss; Beagle argues brilliantly the need for magic in our lives and the folly of forgetting to dream. —Nona Vero



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